Into the breach
I present today's Reply All without comment.
Pretty good overall. Had a very "Pearls Before Swine" feel today. The AFLAC "gag" at the end is unnecessary and actually hurts the final panel.
I don't know what I enjoy more: the 1950s Asian stereotype design of Corporal Yo, the crimson heart tattoo on Cookie -- hysterical name BTW "Cookie." HA HA HE HA! HE HA! Cookie is the cook for those of you who are unfamiliar. Cookie! and he cooks! -- or the shoulder/high arm hair on the aforementioned Cookie -- don't get me started on the name. Seriously though, there should be some sort of hair net for that.
I feel like a cheap version of Josh when I do BB critique.
As always, feel free to head on over to read my 2x Washington Post Best WebComic nominated comic Navy Bean, where the laughter is plentiful and where your soul (among other things) will be touched.
-Melange
Also available for life coaching and comics writing help. mr.navy.bean@gmail.com
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